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Untitled poem

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I want to kick a large stone
So that when it flies away from me
It takes my troubles too.

I want to stand in the rain
So that when it drips off me
It takes my problems with it.

I want to scream and scream
So that when I do
Someone will hear me.

I want to plug my ears
So that when They talk to me
I won't hear their lies.

I want to squeeze my eyes shut
So that when I open them
I'll finally see clearly.

I want to sleep forever
So that when I wake
I'll wake in a better place...
I was really depressed last friday... dunno why...
Anyway, I wrote this down on a scrap of paper and found it today! *Lucky for me, I date my work now (beams)*
So I reread it, and actually liked it... so here it is... my untitled poem...
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flesh-eating-weasels's avatar
I love this poem... I think it's something that a lot of people experience, yet not everyone can express, and I think you did that perfectly. To sleep forever would be great... hmm... guess where I'd wake up :D